crowstar

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Name:
Crowstar

Age:
30 moons

Clan:
Flightclan

Rank:
Leader

Gender:
Female

Picture:
crowstar

Quick Appearence:
A long skinny black cat with long limbs and thin fur.

Appearence:
Hello there, my name is Crowstar. I look much like my sister, we’re identical twins. I’m a bit longer though, and much skinnier. No matter how much I eat you can always see my ribs. My legs are bony, long, and thin with small paws on the end. My claws are long and sharp ready to slash through even the toughest of skin. I don’t have much muscle but I do have the build to fight in a way. My fur is black like silverpelt when the stars are shrouded by the clouds. That’s why I got my name.
My head is small like my body. My cheekbones are higher and they jut out. Not to noticeable though. I have tall and wide sensitive ears that have thick fur inside that protect them from dirt and such. My snout is very short with an even smaller black nose on the end. My eyes are large and bright blue. They reflect the sky, or so my mother says.
I have long black crow wings. They are strong and well-built, yet they are skinny. The bones constructing the wings are easily seen. The feathers are skinnier on top but thicker near the bottom.

Personality:
I’m different from my sister. I’m never the social butterfly type like I used to be. I’m cold-hearted, or so they say. I keep to myself mainly and the only one I converse with is my sister and mentor. If needed I do speak with Darkstar here and there but only on special occasions. I’m sensitive, but I’m not shy. I can get in nasty fights if need be. For one thing I’m not scared, just filled with sorrow of what has passed.
I have to keep talking low or all my feelings will spill out. I’m filled with the memories of what has happened and I can’t change them. That is why I am the way I am. The other cats don’t understand me like Nightpaw, but that’s because she experienced it to. Some days I go out of my way and break out of my shell to talk to other apprentices, but it is unlikely. I do still like to play sometimes but I am more serious about my duties. My past mess-ups are behind me and I will never walk that road again.

History:
kithood The saddest time of my life. Most warriors say it was the best because they still got to experience warrior life but without all the boring duties. Mine was much different from that. I never knew my mother Littleroot, I only know her name. My father was never around but we were adopted. Cats treated us differently because of this. Plenty of cats were adopted before but for some reason we got “special treatments.” Me and my sister always caused trouble, not only between us but with my other two brothers too. Me and my sister started all of it though. The worst trouble we ever caused though was the death of our brothers.
It was before dawn and me and Nightpaw had already woken up. She asked if we wanted to go out on an adventure in the forest. We agreed quickly, well I did so my brothers followed me. I was like the leader of the group. My descision was final. I don’t know why. So we left and were out in the forest by ourselves. At the time it was so much fun. Then we dared Moonkit to sniff a hole we found. He did, suddenly he was dragged in. We just stared, then it came out. The fox that took two of my brothers lives. We had started running, Nightpaw, Berrykit, and I. But berrykit was slow and the fox took him down fast. I knew he was dead the moment we were back at camp and he hadn’t arrived yet. We were given the punishment of staying in the nursery for a whole nother’ moon.
apprenticeship I finally made it to where I am today. My training hasn’t been a lot yet as I have been an apprentice for one simple moon. My mentor siad i am fast and a great hunter. My apprenticeship went by to fast and nothing much really happened. Let's move on.
warriorship I was given the name Crowflight due me my blending in during the night. When I run it is like I am flying. I never did much, mostly sat around waiting for my next patrol. But i was probaly one of the most serious of warriors. I always took orders from the leader and I delt with them quickly. I didn't push them off like others. That's why the leader liked me I guess. That's why I became deputy.
leader I have only just became leader. My time has been short here so not much is to be said. I am proud to lead my caln though, we are Flightclan. brave and strong. That's my hisotry!

Role-play Example:
Before i post this is from when Crowpaw was an apprentice:


Crowpaw
Streaking through the
darkness like a flying
crow



Crowpaw woke up to the dawn rays glowing
through the bushes surrounding the apprentice
den. Suprisingly Ironheart hadn't charged through
yet to yell at Crowpaw to wake up and get ready
to train. So Crowpaw just lay there until the dreaded
time was to arive. Her black fur ruffled as a breeze
started to shift the leaves. Now he was cold and
decided the best thing to do was to get up and
stretch his limbs.

The scent of prey drifted to her nose but she just
ignored it knowing that elders, kits, and queens
ate first. So she sat in the middle of camp waiting
for the deputy, also her mentor, to come out of
wherever she was. Suddenly the apprentice den
bushes rustled again and her sister Nightpaw walked
out. Right when she saw Crowpaw she pranced over
with a big smile on her face. "Hey Crowpaw! You're
not out training for once!" she laughs. Unlike
Crowpaw, Nightpaw didn't care about her duties
as much. Ever since Crowpaw lost both her brothers
she has been more serious about life in general.

Crowpaw just stared at her sister and finaly she left
walking off a little upset. She was just like that though.
Crowpaw felt a wave of relief wash over her after she
left. Now she wouldn't have to talk to her at all. By now
Crowpaw was a little worried about Ironheart. She
was never this late. Still Crowpaw just stayed in her
spot since she really had nothing else to do.

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Please capitalize everything that needs to have a capital letter, including names, clan names, the beginning of sentences and such. Also, check over grammar and spelling. (:

[crow|bbyC:]

Sorry, I just usually roleplay liek that. C:

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[|l-eternity-l|]

Approved.

[crow|bbyC:]

Thank you. C:

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